you should know by the now that im not like that. i take nice coments and also i dont get offended if people put their imput i like to here peoples opinion so that i can see weither or not ill need to improve or weither it was a persons individual thoughts
Holy cow. We don't have any fucking buildings like this here.
That's an impressive shot, I like the architecture and tone of the building, I think you ought to have tonemapped the clouds seperately with a different light smoothing setting, and laid it overtop because the way it is now the clouds are drab and lack inspiring contrast. Achieving an impacting, contrasting relationship between sky and landscape is what I believe should be the number one of an HDR photographer, otherwise potential is wasted.
I think you could have quite improved the bottom ground below the building, since you have decided to include it. The cars and the person are like wtf. Here's this super image and some bitch and a fedex advertisement are violating its strength. Those could be easily cloned out. I had to do that with a couple of my pictures. You may consider removing the distracting buildings on the right and left. And, if you're a king at manipulating, you could do the cool thing of duplicating that black car six or so times down that street, so that a surreal symmetry is achieved by all identical cars parked perfectly in line.
However, the horizontal lines of the trees, and the detail in the fence contrasting the pleasant green (though a bit yellow) grass.
Another main thing I noticed is the unpleasantly tilted horizontal lines of the 'horizon'. It's tilted down quite a bit to the left. I quick session in Warp Image would get rid of that effectively without having to sacrifice corners by rotating.
sorry about that isaiah pressed the enter button lol. i really appreciate it. and wow you actualluy realy had a good look at my picture. i didnt really relaise that it was tilted abit. about me being good at manipulating i dont do that, so i wouldnt know how to do all that. i was thinking about trying to remove the people and the vn but i thought it would be to hard. i have another shot similar to this one but a different angle, so i will upload thta one soon and maybe thta shot would eb alot better. but this shot is in singapore and yes it is a master piece once again thank you for your opininons
oh sorry.... tis still a great photo reporting real life. Maybe you need to tone the white down a little bit - the human eye apparetnyl always looks to the whitest part of a picture first! so i just discovered tonight.